User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity/Kenthecreator Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted_Model_of_Accelerating_Leadership_Identity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted_Model_of_Accelerating_Leadership_Identity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have a great start to your article giving the general definition of your theory. From there, I would suggest expanding on this definition and giving a summary of what your article will contain like the different sections. You'll want to state the most important information about your theory in the lead section without too much detail as that will come later in your sections. When you write the rest of your lead it should give the reader a good sense of the importance of the theory. Also, as you go, make sure to pull information from several reliable sources to expand on the knowledge and not exhaust one source.