User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity/Sarahabrams2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead description is a good start to describing the Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity, however it is definitely missing a more in depth description of what is to come in the further sections of the article. Once you have this, you will be off to a great start and your article will be set up for success. Make sure to find the balance of adding a few more bits to give the readers insight on what they will learn about the Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity, while also making sure you are not overloading with information right from the start. Once you get into the content really focus on making sure your information is clear, organized, relevant, and includes citations. Once you do this it will make for a great article!