User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Dominic D928 Peer Review

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Angelina3000/Social Network Theory


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Hello! I just completed a peer review for this article. I feel that you have a very strong Lead. I also love the references. The only thing I would say is that I do not agree with finishing it up with a quote. The quote is good, I would just recommend inputting a couple sentences after explaining and defining in detail what the quote was trying to convey.