User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Kennedypowelll Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start to the lead. I think there should be more of an intro and possible more sources to prove this article is reliable with reliable sources. I also think that the into should include at least a brief description about the theory and also an attention grabber. But so far, the article is well written and shows you know your stuff about the theory.