User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Kurry72 Peer Review

The Lead for the article Social Network Theory starts off with a strong first sentence that covers exactly what's going to be talked about in the article. It does well at covering what possible major sections can be included in the rest of the article with out being over detailed. I also think that covering scope in your lead helps show the overarching talking points that your theory can be applied to so that was a good idea.

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