User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Laurenmyerson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory/Laurenmyerson_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have a really good start to your article! You gave a brief definition and insight onto what we will be learning from reading this. The only thing would, I would try to instead of putting in the quote in the last paragraph, try to write the quote in your own words to what it means to you