User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Lizzo2210 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000/Social Network Theory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe that your group did a fantastic job in begining in the lead to your article. I think it did a great job expressing what the theory is as well as utilizing a variety of articles and by providing adequate stucture. I do believe that you do have some ways to go in adding additional headings and information but so far it does seem to come along well. I did want to note there is a spelling/grammar error in the second paragraph third sentance. I believe the word should be "understanding" instead of "Understand". Other than that i think you are starting off pretty well I just suggest adding more content to further go into the context of what the theroy is, how it started, how it can be applied, etc.