User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/ManuelValeroUCF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
As the lead is great in explaining the theory leaving out some information to be used in other sections would help as it is just the introduction. Your links seem to work and are credible. The pacing of the lead is great as it is easy to read and the sentences follow right into the next opening up the understanding of this theory. Going on the rest of the page should follow up in the pacing of the lead to make the reading understandable and to not cram as much information in a section just the basics.