User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Martiniaudrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far this article is really good! The structure is easy to understand, and the opening paragraph is very in depth. The sources all seem to be reputable and from peer reviewed articles/ journals. The main thing I would focus on is making the flow of the initial paragraph better. It's just the beginning of the article so it is expected that it is not all cohesive yet, but I recommend trying to connect the and sentences a little better so it reads more smoothly. Good job so far!