User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/MeaganLukavec Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Social Network Theory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far it looks like you guys are off to a great start! The start of the article has a neutral tone so just keep that through the article and it’ll be set. I opened some of the links on your references page and they check out! You all have a lot of good information down about SNT, my suggestion would be to reorganize it all into sections (ex/ background/history, overview, tenets, examples, applications, etc) and then elaborate in them. I know this is just the beginning of your draft but you guys have a lot of good material and I can see once you expand on it, it’ll be a great article. Keep it up!