User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Sarahabrams2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Your introductory sentence of your lead is a great beginning, it gives the readers a good preview of what they are going to learn about the Social Network Theory. My suggestion would be to move your theory's lens and scope of your theory to your major sections, as you want to be cautious of not providing an overwhelming amount of information in your lead. The content you have so far is very good, its relevant to your topic, does not seem biased, and is well written.