User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Sophiatroia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Social Network Theory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I think this lead is well structured with strong starting points for the audience. It brings in different points of view, for example, going over the theories lens applications and how they can be applied to real life situations. Also, going over the scope of the theory in the Lead. I would say that I did notice a few grammar mistakes though out the Lead, but just minor spelling and punctuation errors. I would also say to keep personal pronouns out of the article, like "our," since it is formal. Overall, this lead has great potential for the rest of the article and I think following up on more detail of the application of the theory then you will be all good. Keep up the great work!