User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Twetz02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good definition to start off this article it helps clarify what you will be discussing. More elaboration is definitely needed there is not too much to read. Additionally, make sure to check grammar as there are a few mistakes. References were used and good job of outlining all applications of the theory. Article needs more in general.