User:Angelina3000/Social Network Theory/Yingtao Hanbao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000, Emma-leonard, Username2048482, Malexakiss, Melaniebet23, DTrap04, Easolipsis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Social_Network_Theory?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first two sentences in the lead do well in describing Social Network Theory and what it is about. It synthesizes the main idea well. After the second sentence, however, I think the information could be split into different categories. Since the information is about application and scope, those could be their own sections. The paragraphs have clear structure and ideas, so it would just be a minor adjustment. The article seems to be in its beginning stages, and I haven't noticed anything that leans one way or another. The quote at the end of the last paragraph should have an indication of who said it, as well as the reason it is there. The citations seem okay, and are all from peer reviewed research and journal articles, so they have been vetted by professionals in the field. For what is currently a pretty short article, there are quite a few sources, so I don't think any information was left uncited. Overall, it looks like a good start. I would like to see the authors expound more on SNT.