User:Angelinasutton/Study skills/21savage08 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Angelinasutton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelinasutton/Study_skills?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Study skills

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

-"While music is not proven to increase our intelligence that doesn't mean it's not effective in benefitting study sessions, often times especially college students studying can become very stressful and lead to procrastination but using music to calm the body can actually help with productivity."- grammatical errors. Try to break into two sentences, and add a comma between intelligence and that.

-You use the world "actually" a lot during the paragraph, try to find a synonym or remove it for a few of them.

-The paragraph is concise, and uses good references.

-Other than some grammatical errors, this draft looks good.