User:Angelinasutton/Study skills/Lilrayrobb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelinasutton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelinasutton/Study_skills?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Study skills

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There is no lead to the body. A lead is important as it provides a brief summary of your article body. Also try to keep the word "you","your", or anything referring to a specific person. The goal is to keep it informative, using you makes the reader think it is more about them or their person. The overall information is okay and and informative without being biased. Something towards the end to wrap up everything would help to instead of stopping on a part of information.