User:Angelinasutton/Study skills/Wub916 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelinasutton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelinasutton/Study_skills?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Study skills

Evaluate the drafted changes
in this draft, the student describes the benefits of music for studying in a detailed way and the discuss process is part coherent and convincing. however, the problem is that this part is not correctly assigned to the appropriate section, which makes it a bit confusing. furthermore, inferring from the existing section and structure of the draft, i think there may be more skills added to this topic apart from the existing skills, that is listening to the music. when adding more skills for learning in this draft, i think the writer have to attribute content fairly, which can be a big challenge.