User:Angelita Cecilia/Indonesian comedy/TKUW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Angelita Cecilia)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Indonesian_comedy&type=revision&diff=1067336780&oldid=763183578
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indonesian comedy
 * Indonesian comedy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I love how you are first working on details such as peoples name and different dates. Also the changes you made on grammar are really helpful because those things seem like unrecognized but there are people who could actually be bothered by those errors. Things I recommend to improve on are, finding different sources outside of what is already listed. Maybe have a section just to show what makes Indonesian comedians different from other comedians. So, far the little edits you have done will make a huge different when you publish it but maybe think of things to add beside making those correction. GREAT WORK!!

Angel: Thanks for your feedback!