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Analyse of "Qiu Dahong"

The article Qiu Dahong was selected for Wikipedia. Its first substantive editor was on February 8 in 2019, the author of which was Zanhe. It introduces the date of birth of Qiu Dahong and also shows its profile. The contents of the archives include a summary of his outstanding contributions. If I had created these articles, I would have taken a combination of graphic and text to make it easier for readers to learn about this great marine engineer. At the same time, I will emphasize his contribution to the construction of the port, focusing on main points, rather than using the same length of paragraphs to be expressed in accordance with the timeline. If I were the second reader, I would add some examples to the introduction of the contribution of Qiu Dahong, thereby proving the importance of his contribution. Furthermore, I will add some sections, such as the evaluation of Qiu Dahong by others, a summary of his writings, and so on. This is what I changed to the wikipedia entry. I added one paragraph and the citation for Geography's section.

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