User:Angeluztb/Celtic Britons/Acw055 Peer Review

Peer Review

General info
Angeluztb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Angeluztb/Celtic Britons
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Celtic Britons

Evaluate the drafted changes
Changes and additions made within the draft were not bolded, so I am reviewing in a side by side comparison with original article.

Additional information added to content to meet areas where citations are needed.

Please note there are multiple instances throughout the entire article where "AD" is put after the year number mentioned. Based on CMoS 9.34, "AD" should always precede the year number.

I recommend making a few sweeps throughout the article for the technical errors, specifically the lack of serial or oxford commas and reviewing language used. There are instances of relative time references such as the word "today" used frequently throughout the original article; absolute specifications of time are preferred by Wikipedia. Also recommend reviewing and removing idioms from within the article, I only located one at the time of my review.

Overall the additions had appropriate active voice and neutral tone. Great start!