User:Angiegarciaa/Hershey fonts/C00l Muffinz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angiegarciaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Angiegarciaa/Hershey fonts - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hershey fonts - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, your additions are well formulated in terms of being neutral and all of the information relating is to each other. Clearly, we are all in the early stages and additional information is to be expected so I will not nit-pick for article length. I think a good way to lengthen what you have would be to provide specific examples which could also provide you with more sources (ex. where the fonts are used in the industry and how they're easily rotated for them etc.) I love that you link back to other Wikipedia articles in your draft as well. I think if you keep it up you will have a strong article. ~Abbi <3