User:Angiesyz/Male contraceptive/ArlenSanchez Peer Review

Hi Angie!

I think its great that you are doing your Wiki article on Male Contraceptives - definitely an interesting topic that has been undergoing various new research.

Something that I really liked about your additions was the use of neutral language that allows readers to further think beyond certain ideas on their own agenda. For example, when you stated, "However, the withdrawal method is the simplest and cost-free contraceptive method, with a long history of practice since ancient time." This expands onto various other concepts and practices related to male contraceptive use such as accessibility that is often left undiscussed when related to male contraceptive use - however from my knowledge seems to be widely discussed when it comes to female contraceptive use.

I looked through your sources and don't see anything out of ordinary and you are using a great range of sources - it looks like you are using well established journal articles too.

You have a good structure to your additions that compliments the original article well.

I really like your additions so far and hope to keep reading more.