User:AngstyArmadillo/Coos Bay/Elkhazem Peer Review

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So far great job! I assume you were probably going to do some of this anyways, but just in case. I think since you are covering a specific location adding a reference photo of Coos Bay would be helpful. I am not sure if the intention is to add more to the physical Geography subsection, but if not, I would consider trying to combine some of them. It looks like some of that information is in the table and I would just be clear about referencing everything in that properly. I think adding some more context around the Wildlife section would help things flow better something similar to the Shellfish section.