User:AnimalBehaviorStudent/Dog aggression/Avajar20 Peer Review

Peer Review

This article is coming along very nicely! The first paragraph is clear and concise, though I think that it could be flushed out a bit more, depending on how much information or research is available. Everything here is cited well and all references and links look good. Great job of using scientific articles to support your statements.

It is interesting to have a new section including the types of aggressiveness in dogs, though these too could probably have more information added. Some examples may be helpful here as well.

I don't know your plan with the "causes" section between the sandbox and the actual article but there seems to be a lot of information here, which is great, but I would recommend maybe creating secondary headings to make it better organized and easier to read.

The tone is this article seems very neutral and scientific, great job!

Reference 2 seems to be missing a date, which is available on the research article.