User:Anirod12345/Nora Marks Dauenhauer/Weedsandherbsandflowers Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anirod12345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Anirod12345/Nora Marks Dauenhauer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nora Marks Dauenhauer

Evaluate the drafted changes
It doesn't look like you have made any changes to your article. Feel free to send me a message or comment on my talk page when you have made changes and I'll review again. In general here are some tips I have for improving the page:

You might consider reorganizing the "Life" page so that everything listed is sequential. As it is now it goes from birth, accolades within her nation, her early life, and then death. It might read better if her accolades were listed right before her death or right after.

The "Career" section could use some work fixing grammar.

The "Personal" section is extremely short and seems like its contents could either fit into the "Life" page or content from the "Life" page could be moved into "Personal".