User:Anishsun/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Celilo Miles


 * Article Evaluation
 * Article needs to be created, will use the content covered in class discussion post for the article


 * Sources
 * https://www.atelierkate.com/post/meet-celilo-miles
 * https://www.vogue.com/slideshow/victorias-secret-love-cloud-launch-celilo-miles-interview
 * https://www.sportskeeda.com/pop-culture/who-celilo-miles-firefighter-lands-victoria-s-secret-love-cloud-campaign

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Winnette McIntosh Ambrose
 * Winnette McIntosh Ambrose


 * Article Evaluation
 * In my opinion, the content missing that could be worked on is the individual's early life, engineering side, the story behind the origins of the bakery, the DC area and the cooking industry, and how she got on Cupcake Wars. The organization and overall flow of the article is decent however it feels a bit choppy and out of order. The article is concise and clear however the sections could be rearranged to work in chronological order beginning with the individual's early life and later progressing to their education background, and later their career journey in the baking industry. Overall impressions of this article is that the status is complete, yet could definitely be improved and expanded upon in terms of content, media, sources, and including different viewpoints and perspectives into the individual's life.


 * Sources
 * http://napa-institute.org/speakers/dr-winnette-mcintosh-ambrose/
 * https://www.blackhistory.mit.edu/archive/timothy-mcintosh-and-winnette-mcintosh-ambrose-2012
 * https://caribbeanheritageawards.org/winnette_mcintosh_ambrose
 * https://www.washingtonpost.com/lifestyle/style/winnette-mcintosh-ambrose-does-double-duty-at-sweet-lobby-bakery-and-nih-lab/2012/04/06/gIQAkaph0S_story.html

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Bridge to Terabithia
 * Bridge to Terabithia (novel)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is currently rated C-Class and is listed as a "level five vital article." The talk page also has a lot of controversy. The article did not specifically give context for why the book has been avoided and banned in educational settings, which could be improved on.


 * Sources
 * https://www.tor.com/2013/09/25/banned-books-week-bridge-to-terabithia-katherine-paterson/#:~:text=Bridge%20to%20Terabithia%20has%20the,and%20a%20lot%20of%20swearing.
 * https://bannedbooks.library.cmu.edu/katherine-paterson-bridge-to-terabithia/
 * https://bbark.deepforestproductions.com/column/2012/11/04/banned-books-awareness-bridge-to-terabithia/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Justin Richardson (author of Tango makes Three)
 * Justin Richardson


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article doesn't read completely well as it lacks a concrete and distinct lead section outlining a summary of what the person was known for. The overall structure is unclear and it is rated Stub-Class in Wikipedia and because of this, it becomes hard to identify the individuals' early life, with their career, and works in life. The article is also not written in chronological order based on time which would help. The article could also use more reliable sources throughout the biography.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
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