User:Anjdarji/Sport psychology/Angb2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Anjdarji)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anjdarji/Sport_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The author did a great job touching on the different approaches sports psychologists use and how it could help their patients but I do see what these exercises consist of. For instance, the psychophysiological approach. What are different methods are used and how does it help them improve their vitals? When clicking on the citations, I noticed that they both referenced the same book. I think that the author could benefit from other resources as well. They managed to remain neutral in their editing and writing which was also good.

Thank you for your feedback! I do need to add more sources into the work but I got drawn to what I found in the source that I used. I will make sure to find more sources to cite from. Thank you for your critique and kind comments!