User:Anjdarji/Sport psychology/Jtc7 Peer Review

While it started great with giving examples if different approaches in sport psychology as well as giving a brief description of what each approach provided. Towards the end the focus looked as if it was changing with out finishing up the original idea. Great start but could use a bit more of organization.

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Thank you for your feedback! This is different than the other critics I received so thank you for this perspective. I agree that the organization was something I was struggling with but I appreciate your comments and will make edits to make it flow together smoother and tying the point back to my original statement.