User:Anjdarji/Sport psychology/Marleywdunn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

anjdarji


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anjdarji/Sport_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great work on your edits so far, wiki buddy :) I like that you added information to the lead that connects to the section you're adding to. I think your section about the three approaches is really informative and well sourced as well! One place that I saw in the article that could be a good source of editting is the section under the heading "Ur free." I don't really understand that section and why it has that heading so it definitely could use clarification. Good luck with the rest of your edits!

Hey wiki buddy! Thank you for your sweet words and for the feedback on my contributions to the article. I am not sure where you are seeing that heading, I looked through my draft again and could not find the heading you mentioned. If you could still see it there please let me know!