User:AnjelicaRae/Roman invasion of Caledonia 208–210/Ford AJ Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AnjelicaRae


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AnjelicaRae/Roman Invasion of Caledonia 208-210


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Roman Invasion of Caledonia 208-210

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi!

Considering the scarcity of information on this specific invasion I think you've found some great sources, though that scarcity does end up affecting the length of the article. Your contributions mesh well with the rest of the article, with the only revealing factor being that you actually cite your sources. The information you've added fills in some important gaps that really improve the article. Everything you've added is clear in meaning and impressive in quality. Barring the sudden discovery of new information or a secondary source devoted to the invasion, I think you may find it easier to focus on improving the number of citations connected to the information already present in the article (it has to have come from somewhere). For example, there are no citations in the lead paragraph whatsoever and I think you could make some real improvements there.

You seem to have a pretty clear idea of how you want to improve this article, and honestly I can't wait to see how it turns out!