User:Anjpatel/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Benadryl


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is poorly written in that it only has a lead paragraph. There needs to be additional sections that describe the pharmacodynamics and pharmacokinetics of the drug. The tone is neutral and there are a lot of sources that are referenced in the article. Regarding the Talk page, there is discussion regarding the need for this article i.e. the generic form is well-written on wikipedia but the brand name needs to be developed. I think I would agree and link the word "Benadryl" to the diphenhydramine article so that readers can easily locate the information.


 * Sources
 * Banerji, Aleena; Long, Aidan A.; Camargo, Carlos A. (2007-7). "Diphenhydramine versus nonsedating antihistamines for acute allergic reactions: a literature review". Allergy and Asthma Proceedings. 28 (4): 418–426. doi:10.2500/aap.2007.28.3015. ISSN 1088-5412. PMID 17883909.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Pirbuterol


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article lays a great foundation for a discussion regarding the drug. However, many of the sections need to be developed and a pharmacodynamics section needs to be added. It is neutrally written but is missing a lot of information. There is no active discussion on the Talk page.


 * Sources
 * Weber, Richard W.; Nelson, Harold S. (1984). "Pirbuterol Hydrochloride: Evaluation of Beta Adrenergic Agonist Activity in Reversible Obstructive Pulmonary Disease and Congestive Heart Failure". Pharmacotherapy: The Journal of Human Pharmacology and Drug Therapy. 4 (1): 1–9. doi:10.1002/j.1875-9114.1984.tb03301.x. ISSN 1875-9114.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Atorvastatin/Amlodipine


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article only has a lead paragraph and is missing a discussion on the pharmacodynamics and pharmacokinetics of each drug. There needs to be a discussion on the toxicities regarding a combination. The article has a neutral tone but the sections need to be more developed.


 * Sources
 * Devabhaktuni, Madhuri; Bangalore, Sripal (2009). "Fixed combination of amlodipine and atorvastatin in cardiovascular risk management: patient perspectives". Vascular Health and Risk Management. 5 (1): 377–387. doi:10.2147/vhrm.s3339. ISSN 1178-2048. PMC 2686256. PMID 19475775.

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Penicillin


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is pretty well-developed but I think there are several sections that need to be modified. For example, the side effects section needs changes regarding the distinction between a true allergy and intolerance to penicillin. For the most part, the article has a neutral tone but there needs to be modifications in the information presented.


 * Sources
 * Sacco, K. A.; Bates, A.; Brigham, T. J.; Imam, J. S.; Burton, M. C. (2017-9). "Clinical outcomes following inpatient penicillin allergy testing: A systematic review and meta-analysis". Allergy. 72 (9): 1288–1296. doi:10.1111/all.13168. ISSN 1398-9995. PMID 28370003.

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