User:Anjsan01/Milk frother/FrankChen1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anjsan01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anjsan01/Milk_frother?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Milk frother

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

There has been no addition to the lead section content and the table of contents were removed, which I believe can be helpful in navigating the article and should be added back.

Content

Your added sections provide good information regarding the milk frother, which also has good subsections. Good job!

Tone and balance

Tone and balance are neutral and unbiased.

Image and Media

None added.

Organization

Would recommend adding table of contents.

Overall Impressions

Informational but can be expanded on lead section to reflect updates.