User:Anna.gking/Xie Jin/Aierz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The username is Anna.gking.

The wiki project is Xie Jin.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anna.gking/Xie_Jin?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Xie Jin

Evaluate the drafted changes
They should put thier references in the bibliography, there is nothing there. But they did put the references' link in the sandbox.

Johnson, Matthew (2009). "Xie Jin". Berkshire Encyclopedia of China: Modern and Historic Views of the World's Newest and Oldest Global Power. Vol. 5. Berkshire Publishing Group. pp. 2512–2513.

This is the second reference they are using does not have a working link, if it does not hava electronic form then they should provide the ISBN code for it.

And the fisrt and third reference link shows error, maybe they should fix that if they can.

They are adding a new section into the wiki page which disscuess Xie Jin base on the moive Two Stage Sisters.

From what they are talking about is all based on one single movie, it is hard to evaluate a filmmaker by only one of his works. Maybe they can add other films made by him as additional information. Otherwise, if they add this to the wiki page, Two Stage Sisters will have so much information, but other successful movies do not have many focuses. Therefore, the information on the wiki page will feel unbalanced.