User:Annacaroline01/Ashley M. Jones/KMBenison Peer Review

General info
(AnnaCaroline01)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ashley_M._Jones&diff=1187681768&oldid=1187380333 Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think the very first section is very powerful and gives the correct information for an introduction the your person of topic.
 * I like that some of the words were edited and take out to make the overall flow of the article better.
 * There is a lot go good information in most of your sections I feel this is good because you could never go wrong with having as much detail about something/ someone that is not as well known as others.
 * There are a lot of references listed on the article which is helpful to help give more information to anyone who visits the page
 * The section with the influences and poetic style is very helpful I also tried to include something similar in my article as well.
 * I feel that the amount of information you included was very helpful I really don't see too much of anything that would be a big issue in you're article.

Kamari' Benison