User:Annamarkelin/Honeybee starvation/BeckxStrap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Annamarkelin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Annamarkelin/Honeybee_starvation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a really good start! I would recommend adding a reference for the "direct effect on the economy" sentence as well as the picture (if it was one you added yourself). Maybe it's a personal opinion too, but I think the text is a little chunky and could perhaps be broken up into more paragraphs. I would also note some of the crops that are affected earlier on in the beginning and maybe add any conservation efforts that may already be in place :)