User:Annamirly/Medical–industrial complex/Flamerune567 Peer Review

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Annamirly/Medical–industrial complex
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annamirly/Medical%E2%80%93industrial_complex
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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) Hi! This article is very solid when it comes to breaking down what the medical-industrial complex is all about, especially how it plays out in healthcare and impacts folks' lives. You've done a good job connecting the dots between the past and what's happening now, showing us how impactful the MIC is in the U.S. healthcare scene.

I like how the article isn't just throwing facts at you; it's also diving into how different communities, especially those that are often pushed to the sidelines, are impacted by the MIC. I also enjoyed how you included a global example with the bit about Brazil, giving us a peek into how other places are handling similar issues.

While it's packed with info, it could definitely be a bit smoother. Some parts feel like they're jumping around, and it could flow better from one idea to the next. I would also enjoy some more direct examples or stories to make the whole concept more relatable and less abstract.

All in all, though, if you're looking to get the gist of what the medical-industrial complex is and why it should matter to us, this article's got you covered. It's a decent read for getting a handle on a pretty complex topic!