User:Annamirly/Medical–industrial complex/Samhivellala Peer Review

General info
Annamirly
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Annamirly/Medical–industrial complex
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Medical–industrial complex

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how the authors made the Lead, as well as the entirety of the page more concise to get key points across in a more effective manner. I like that they removed components of the article that didn't seem as relevant and actually expanded upon key concepts (i.e. the White Savior Industrial Complex), which I think serves to better address equity gaps (socioeconomic factors and race) that result in disparities with access to healthcare. The content added is neutral and is thoroughly backed up by sources and expert perspectives. The citation links work and are up to date as well. I think in terms of shortcomings, it may be helpful to include another country under India and Brazil and explaining the MIC in the context of that country just to add versatility to the article. Additionally, I think adding a greater spectrum of expert perspectives could help to present discourse around the MIC more comprehensively; are there any scholars who disagree with the claims made by scholars that are currently included in the article?