User:Annapiwko27/Language-based learning disability/Jmwhitfi23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Annapiwko27


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annapiwko27/Language-based_learning_disability?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language-based learning disability

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you entered a very interesting and relevant fact when you mentioned that 70-80% of people with learning disabilities have it related to reading. I think its a very important fact to be aware of when learning about the topic. It gives us and me a better understanding of just exactly what people are struggling with. I think you added a very relevant fact and it looks good!