User:Annatardecilla/Health education/Cmaravilla37 Peer Review

I think throughout the sandbox for health education, gives insightful information for people wanting to go into health education. I think the only things I would add or clarify is some of the sentences within the health education credentials. This would be because for the average reader might struggle with digesting a lot of the information in each sentence. With a background in Public Health Education before switching to Family Life Science, the information to me is pretty straightforward and knowledgable for already taking some classes, but for people who are not in a program or have little knowledge about it might struggle making sense of it. Other than that, I think everything is thought out and well put together. Keep up the great work!

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