User:Annatardecilla/Health education/Tricia Rayer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Annatardecilla/Health education


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Annatardecilla/Health education


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Health education

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Role of the Health education specialist definitely has a great start to what could be added more. I would consider into breaking down each part that you have mentioned. Example would be talking about how health education impacts behavior and its improvement. Another thing you can look into is the individual strategies of intervention. The next set of paragraphs that are written have very good information that goes along with your topic of choice but I believe it can be a whole neither section, with that you can see if anything else can be added in along with the credentials.