User:Annavc3/Viperfish/Lauraellis4 Peer Review

Lauraellis4's Review General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Reviewing sylvieyee's work and section on feeding.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Viperfish sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Viperfish

Evaluate the drafted changes
I know you didn't specifically work on the lead but I like how DVM was mentioned there and then again in the feeding section to give an introduction to it early on! The content added was definitely relevant to the topic of Viperfish and it all comes from credible, current sources that have active links and do contain the information they are being cited for. I did notice that the same article had a citation in the references created for it three times (#20, 22 and 23) so maybe you can just reuse the first citation so it would cite #20 three times!

The content is very neutral and I don't detect any biases or un-cited claims. Although maybe if there was a source for the last sentence of the first paragraph about the prey being high abundance and low occurrence that could be helpful since I was curious how it could be both! Also just a technical thing for that sentence, people who don't know the subtypes of Viperfish (like myself haha) may think that C. sloani is an example of the prey rather than a type of viperfish so that could potentially be clarified a bit more. I liked the organization of the page and thought the writing flowed well together. I thought it was great how you added in some of the adaptations it has relating to feeding behavior! If you were looking to add more info maybe you could talk about the specific diets of some of the species like for C. sloani since the first sentence is pretty generic but there also might not be much info on it and that's why more aren't included.

Overall, I thought it was a great section to add and had some great information with a strong introductory sentence and then more specific cited concepts within. Great job, definitely improves the overall quality of the article!!!