User:Annawood2/Limestone/ShawnInnocent99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Annawood2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Annawood2/Limestone


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Limestone

Lead Section
There is no lead section for this draft because it is an addition to an already existing article.

Content
Content is relevant to the topic. New information added is not available in the already existing page. More data can be added for the scarcity section as there still is a lot to cover for the current scarcity issues.

Tone and Balance
The tone used is neutral and does not make a case for any sides. Only facts were presented. Information is impartial and does not try to sway a person's opinion.

Organization
there is a good flow to the paragraph. Information added is broken down so that it is easy to read. Concise sentences that get to the main point quickly.

Overall impression
The draft has new information which makes the article better. Basic necessary information that was added is pivotal to the article as it makes the article easier to understand. Sources could be a little better and more spread out.