User:AnnieZhou11/Angel De Cora/Fan Qi7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm reviewing AnnieZhou11's article, which is about Angel De Cora


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AnnieZhou11/Angel_De_Cora?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Angel De Cora

Evaluate the drafted changes
AnnieZhou11 currently is working on the Article Body section. The content added is well relevant to the topic, which made a very proper supplement to this artist. The tone is neutral and the viewpoints are fair, without overrepresented, or underrepresented and any persuasion in a particular position. The reference is well listed in the section, and it is a reliable source of information. The content is reflected and paraphrased accurately and what the cited source say. The areas that can be improved in the future are: add/use more sources and categorize the content in different section (Background/education/personal, etc.) Don’t forget the bibliography section. Very impressive work and looking forward to see your future work!