User:Annika.Nicholas/Athena Promachos/JLW546 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Annika.Nicholas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annika.Nicholas/Athena_Promachos?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Athena Promachos

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the images and descriptions that you added in your draft. The statue of Athena Promachos in the Academy of Athens gardens is nice because it helps show what a perspective of an ancient Greek would be looking up at the figure, rather than a modern individual looking at it in a museum. I noticed you also added a more in depth description of one of the images of a coin that was on the article. That is a great addition that better contextualizes the subject. Would you want to add comments to these images for accessibility/screen readers?

You have done a great job of filling out the references with all the appropriate information. Are any of those sources available online that you could insert a link to? That may be a good way to help readers.

I am not sure what your plans are for the lead and body sections of the article. Maybe under the iconography section of the original article, would you think it worthwhile to add some description of symbolism or cultural meaning of the statue?

Overall, I think you are doing a good job fleshing out the article and moving towards having a balanced, well sourced page.