User:Annsli.Hilton/Spongilla/Karaganr1 Peer Review

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Capitalize Leonard. 3rd sentence is lengthy. Could be either divided in to 2 or rephrased to condense. "The symbiotic zoochlorellae give the sponges a green appearance, without them they would appear white " can be rephrased as "The symbiotic zoochlorellae give the sponges a green appearance and without them they would appear white." Don't start your last sentence with because in the reproduction paragraph. There is good content but I would work on making the sentences less wordy. The picture and the references look good.