User:AnnyP29/Reading Motivation/Wsciales Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * AnnyP29


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Reading motivation (Do not see sandbox draft)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reading motivation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very well written. I like how it clearly defines what reading motivation is. However, it may be useful to make the reading strategies into a section on its own. The lead we want to stick with just introducing the topic. It could be helpful to mention the sections of the article you will be writing about and how it connects to your topic.

The content is very informative. I would like to know more about the effects that intrinsic and extrinsic motivation has on children. Are there any studies with concrete data that you can put in here. You can put short term and long term effects of the two motivators as well.

The tone and balance is neutral. Good job.

I like the organization of the article. It has clear headings with numbered lists.

Adding images in the article may increase my motivation to read it!

Overall, I think you have some good information here. I like it.

Best,

William