User:Anomalocrisis/Canyonlands National Park/Texasbird Peer Review

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to include new info from the editor, however the new section looks like a great addition to the section on Climate. The new content included so far by the editor looks relevant and well written. It also appears that that content is current and not missing any key points. The content added also seemed to be neutral in tone and very little signs of biased language. Overall the content did not seem to have any major grammatical errors and was well written. The sources provided by the editor are expansive and seem to have accurate information. There are no new photos but that is not entirely necessary as there seems to be plenty of photos in the original article. The links to the sources all seem to work. Overall the new additions to the article look good and seem to be well thought-out.