User:AnonVisor/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ahad Ha'am

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Ahad Ha'am is incredibly important figure in zionist movement, both for his activism as well as the development of cultural zionism. I was curious to see how the article would dilineate between his biographical and ideological information.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is informative, and provides the reader with a clear idea of what is to come. The content can be somewhat confusing in terms of the section. I am not entirely sure if I agree with the overall structure of the article, but I am also not sure what more suitable subtopics would look like. Additionally, I am not sure if the long excerpt makes a ton of sense in the "Visits to Palestine" section of his wikipedia page.