User:AnonVisor/Martin Buber/Hms2026 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anonvisor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AnonVisor/Martin_Buber?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Martin Buber

Evaluate the drafted changes
Draft does not include an updated lead section, but I think the current lead section on the published article is good. You might want to condense that a little bit as you continue editing.

I like that you split up the evolution of Buber's views/actions chronologically, but I don't think that should entirely replace the article. So if you're planning on just adding the new content in to supplement the existing article I think it will be very good. The sources used look really good, reliable, diverse, etc (check on source five though the citation looks like it didn't generate correctly).

I am somewhat confused about where you will add in your changes, as it seems that much of the content you added in would be able to apply to multiple sections. For example, the content in the section "1910-1938" could apply to two existing sections: '"Zionist Views" and "Literary and Academic Career". Perhaps as you continue editing you could start to reorganize the content into these existing sections.

If you can find further information on the topic I think it would be valuable to expand on more specific motivations for Buber's advocacy of binationalism.

Overall the changes you have made and are planning on making look like they will improve the article a lot, I would just continue to think about how you will add those changes into the existing article.