User:AnonVisor/Martin Buber/That guy5947 Peer Review

Okay obviously the focus of this edit is going to be on his Zionist views, just make sure whatever changes are made get reflected in the lead section as well.

You have a lot of solid writing and clearly plans to add a lot more. I checked and none of you additions overlap with the original article, but I do have a suggestion.

if you wanted to change/expand focus you could also included a header for his participation in different political organizations. You mention in your additions that he founded 2 different movements (brit shalom and Ihud) and if there's any other organizations he joined or founded it could deserve a section of its own.

Otherwise, the writing is solid, obviously should go over yourself and confirm it is formal and non-argumentative, but I found no issues, maybe slightly casual in a few spots but nothing significant and could be left in. I'm confident this will end up being a great contribution.

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